A Fairy-tale
Posted on Воскресенье, Март 14th, 2010 at 04:23But he hesitated very much, as earlier he has never done any friends. He was very upset, went home to the mother and told about the girl. Then she gave him an advice: let the dog, who had an ability to speak, will get acquainted with the girl and transfer all words from the boy without a name to her and back. They were walking in a wood for a long time, looking for the girl and preparing the first conversation..
Good God, what a turn!
A lot of notes for you:
make friends, not do
Then she gave him an advice: let the dog, who had an ability to speak, will get acquainted with the girl and transfer all words from the boy without a name to her and back. – a great problem with sequence of tenses can be found here.The safest way out is to use the direct speech instead of indirect.
advice is uncountable, if you want to say один совет it would be «a piece of advise».